I found the entire concept quite delightful, and I must commend you on the ingenuity of your design. On Monday, I managed to reach my second customer while at work, but the screen went dark (once at the shelf, I guess). The experience of consulting the magazine was especially charming, and the world you’ve crafted drew me in at once.
I attempted several playthroughs, and though the game stumbled at different moments each time, the charm of your idea kept me eager to continue. I sincerely hope these minor troubles may be mended, for I should very much like to see where the adventure leads.
You have the beginnings of something truly engaging here. I wish you every success as you continue to refine it.