I really enjoy that your narrative is fragmented. I haven't played through the other choices yet, but I find myself wondering as to what happened to the other character. Although he is very prickly, I like to be nice to him. I'm not sure why I'm driven to be nice to him, but it's likely because the two seem to have a history where their relationship was not as strained. It was also scary (but a little humorous at first) to see him change during each visit. I like that you directly addressed the fact that he is red (drenched in blood) because I initially thought it was unintentional. You really have a way with words as you grotesquely describe his body. I found myself nauseated as I put myself in his place.