Love the beginning. I think the division of the 'me' and the 'you' as different speakers is really interesting. That being said, despite knowing they are the same person, since they were being separated, I expected a little more differentiation just because of that divide you're imposing onto them...maybe it's just me, though. I think the length of this is actually quite nice and would feel a little less abrupt if it had just some simple background ambience beyond the faucet running that faded out before the ending hit. Regardless, I enjoyed the conversation that was had.