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I thought this game looked great, but after playing the first chapter I've realized it's cheesy and the writing is lazy.

Like "oh no, a vampire just kicked me in the chest. Why can't I move?" Oh, it's because the vampire somehow intentionally snapped the MC's neck so he would be paralyzed. But don't worry, I'm sure that will be fine. Can't wait to see how that life changing injury is healed in the next chapter.

On top of that the MC's outfit just looks like a Criss Angel cosplay. and his body looks like it was modeled after a slice of pizza. Why are his shoulders so wide but his hips and legs are so narrow? His body is just two straight lines converging down to one point. Not to mention the stupid-ass cross earring he wears. More edge lord inspiration, I take it?

Anyway, the whole game reads like it was written by a 14 year-old. Sucks, because the graphics are pretty nice and the girls are really well done. I just can't look past the stupid writing and the utterly dumb looking MC. Sorry.


Also, the font for these comments is fucking stupid too. Who the fuck wants letters that link or overlap?

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This person is being overly critical. This game only has a great beginning. Its something different that what others put out and the graphics are better than a lot of other games out right now. 

So creator, don't get discouraged by someone who is trying to sap the joy out of a personal project because at the end of the day what matters is that you enjoy the story you are building. 

This is not constructive criticism but just destructive complaints. HE lost all credibility when he started complaining about the font for the comments. 

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Well good thing I didn't lose credibility until the very end of my comment.