The story is very short, but despite being unfinished works as a cute little vignette. It managed to evoke a real "you had to be there" early Deviantart days feel for me.
I liked the squiggly chaotic style, and the scene with the deer ancestors was a nice tonal and visual contrast.
My only big complain is the Main menu and UI elements: bright blue text on a white background is barely visible and strained my eyes.
I hope this gets finished, I'm curious to see where it was going!