The tone was fantastic, in every sense of the word, but came at the cost of clarity – for example, I still have no idea which voice was the Voice and which the Rune :D Parts of it felt like they came from or were meant for some other piece. Formatting didn't really work (fullscreen pushed the thing into a corner, without fullscreen couldn't see everything) but that feels more like an Arcweave problem :D The writing got really purple at points ("large yet small"), could have been tempered with more down-to-earth bits? Although the point, which it reached, was very much to go for the strange.