Good writing in this one, nice use of repetition. Felt more effective than immersive, functional piece, had the feel of an introductory piece to a new RPG setting. Gameplay elements felt a little tacked on, could have functioned as a more straightforward story piece? In any case nice stuff!
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It's actually based on a D&D 5e and PF2e adventure I wrote a while back. I only had a few hours to make this on the day of submission, so I did what I could. I wanted to experiment with what Arcweave I could learn in that short time, which is why the interactive gameplay bits weren't as fleshed out as I wanted them to be, but your comment is really spot on with my own thoughts about it, so thank you for taking the time to read it and comment on it!