First and foremost, I wish to express my joy at how lovingly written your work is. I've read quite a few IFs here but there's only a few that really pours their soul into writing long passages that depicts their story enough that a chapter feels so full and well thought of. I definitely wasn't left wanting for each chapter, though honestly, I feel like it still wasn't enough but that's only because I am just greedy and so excited to learn more about the MC and their story!
Maybe some people would find the pacing slow but imo, I think it's at the right amount. Slow enough to give you the right amount of world building and character development but fast enough that it isn't a slog to go through. I'm super invested with the story and how it'll come out considering the choices I've made. It's honestly nerve-wracking and I have no idea how it'll turn out aaaaa.
I can't wait for more updates! Now excuse me as I try to get to the neutral route because I prefer peace for both haha! Maybe I should stop prioritizing Maeve because I see no option for the neutral stance at all snrks.
P.S There are some errors I've found while going through your IF. I'm going to list them down below in hopes that it'll help. Some may def feel like a spoiler so SPOILER WARNING!
- During the festival of the 2nd day, I've noticed that going shopping and playing a game (or vice versa) causes the next button to not appear at all, making one unable to progress. However, doing the shopping, hanging out with parents and tarot card reading allows you to progress.
- Then, the fight with Thianne shows an error:
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: Unexpected string
There's more to it but I believe it's an entire paragraph so I'm not copy pasting it here for everyone's sake.
- Also, if you select worrying about Thianne w/o maybe any romance and/or hatred, it'll show this error:
Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected identifier 'flag' <<set $Thianne flag to $Thianneflag + 1>>