Game review
Version reviewed: 0.5
in scale of +100 to -100 points
- +25 Character design (Good, varied, big titties)
- +15 Animations (Good, but not many as of now)
- +5 Has a gallery (Okay, animations missing from it)
- +5 Writing (Okay, characters are a bit bland)
- +5 Assets (Okay, from koikatsu but used very well)
- +5 Bonus points for looking promising
- +2 Playable with one hand (Mouse only)
- +1 No NTR (Based)
- -0 Short game (To notice, non issue)
- -5 Not many choices (Understandable, early development)
- -5 Audio (To improve, scenes lacking, few music)
Total: +53 Good game!
This game looks very very promising, its very noticeable that's its very green as of now, but what we have for now is a good sample of what the game can be if develop further.
The writing is a bit bland the character are very straight forward when expressing themselves, so they lack a bit of personality, also there's this choice where you have to chose what to do with some dickhead and the only options is to kill him or slave him, i found that a bit silly, this isn't really an RPG game but having only those options was silly.
The plot(yes is a porn game but i do care about the plot) its alright its seems its going to be a simple harem in the tavern, without many stakes, i think it could be categorized slice of life maybe? there's also something brewing with the bandits that summon that monster, so there may be higher stakes in the plot in the future.
The art in the game is nice, the characters are made with koikatsu, common in this type of games but its well used, all characters are distinct from each other, and well done each on their own; the only thing to improve would be the almost complete lack of character sprites variations during dialog, character just stand there and fade in and out of scene whenever they are or not in the current dialog, adding more character poses for when they talk or do something would be great for characterization, body language is important.
in conclusion, you are doing great dev! keep it up!