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I loved the art style in this one, particularly the decision to have a black and white scheme and such cartoonish sprites. It really enhances the depression present throughout the story. This is also framed in a pretty neat way, watching old home movies in a freezing attic. That's a good setup. I did find the writing to be a bit choppy and the transitions to be a bit too slow, so the pacing could have been better. I also would have liked to see more of the detailed flashbacks and a touch less of the self-depreciating narration, but I think the story did have a great climax, with the doppelganger stuff and especially the way they were drawn. Loved the ending, too. Overall, this is a solid and relatable story about mental illness. 

Thank you so much for reading the story! ^^ I'm glad you liked the artstyle and story. I'll make sure to keep your comments into mind for future writing. Thank you! <3