I was prepared for a grand old time when I saw the synopsis and the little RO tidbits and I definitely got that--along with so much more. Chapter 1 was long--it was so long yet I didn't even realized the time as I went through each page. It was painful--I actually teared up with tears streaming down my face. Sniffled and wiped my tears several times too. The garden talks with Farah. The Beachside. The trade under the orange tree. Holy shit the trade under the orange tree. I didn't expected to be as affected by it but I was. I would have definitely faltered if I was the MC.
The Chapter was the perfect length to get me attached and GDI you got me attached. It hurts so much ; w ; My chest tightened and actually hurt aaaa. You have a way with words that just evokes so much emotions out of me--especially the familial scenes. Amazing writing and story. I'm a big fan of everything that's happening here.
I'm so excited for your future updates. I will eagerly await for more. Thank you for sharing your work with us!