Thanks for reading my novel!
And yeah the plot could have been stronger. I had to rewrite it from the ground up already, so I can see it being weak on this side. Tried to go for a small tale vibe, so at least that got shown!
My main try with this jam entry was using the textbox to also tell a story. I have failed in readability, cause a lot of people told me already that the text is quite small. Nonetheless, happy that this got shown through!