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Thanks for review. I'll talk more in a post-jam devlog, but basically this vn came out despite my inexperience to write and make an ending to a short story. Wasn't too satisfied with the draft that basically has little story, just events after events showcasing more the world and how one lives in it. 

But one month constraint did put a halt to write more details about Myles as I ran out of space to fit them in the scenes. I treat this title more like an oneshot of my idea in comics terms. A potential proper title would have enough time to focus more on fleshing out Myles as a person and move certain scenes (like grandma's) to their proper late game places as they would actually work as a epiphany for Myles's issues and build towards something.

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Yeah, totally get it - writing in the constraints of the jam is hard, and writing anything is always a learning experience for next time. I think exploring the world further would be cool, considering the time and effort you put into imagining it, whether that be through Myles specifically or even like an anthology of shorter stories that happen in the same universe.