I really enjoyed this. When I voluntarily "ruminated" my traumatic memories, was pulled into a dark thought pattern and then - through another choice - emerged back to Horn's voice, the experience really came together! I reached "you venture into the woods with her, curious to see how Horn has made this abandoned shed her own." and then it ended a bit abruptly. I found this very sensitive and graceful in terms of translating such a subtle emotional experience into interactive fiction, which I think is a serious challenge. Congrats!
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Thank you for such a thoughtful and lovely comment. It really means a lot to me. It was very difficult and emotional to design and write the section with Horn. I had a lot of doubts and even considered not submitting it at all. Knowing that my intentions and hopes for it were felt is really affirming.
Thank you.