I really liked the story and animation that you had going on. My favorite part was when there was the outline of the main character and then a couple of dialog lines later, the full character actually came into view. Great method for showing the character approaching the scene. Something that I would love is if you added was the last line of dialog before giving me the dialog options because I couldn't remember what the original prompt was after reading all the options. Great start to a visual novel type game. Keep it up!