I just learned about your illness after stumbling around this page. and it was heartbreaking to read. one of the worst things that can happen to someone. and one of my greatest fears.
now i feel bad that is distracted you from creating this masterpiece. even if it was for maybe 10 to 20 minutes . don't need to waste your time responding to me but I heavily appreciated the response! and yes I think you have truly tapped a few times into something powerful. between all the jokes and horny scenes. or maybe I'm reading way too much in-between the lines of this story here.
and for clarification I love buildup and context for erotic stuff. I just wasn't prepared for the start. I wasn't prepared to sit threw a lecture and my brain was far too deep into excitement from the premises to pay much attention to the lecture. and because I'm stubborn I didn't skip either with getting on my phone. my main frustration stems from an alternative timeline where I backed out too soon and missed this amazing story. but this isn't a call for change I'm trying not to come off that way. every reader is different. if you don't think anything needs to change then that's that. I'm a writer too so i totally get it. just my unfiltered thoughts about the game from my point of view. and now my greatest fear is not being able to see this game get finished.
so just know I'll be invisibly cheering you on from the sideline. Sexually frustrated and begging for more.