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Hey Stawer,

Been a big fan now for years, this is the Renpy game that got me into hentai gaming and has inspired me and my GF to actually start making our own. I've tried replaying this multiple times but it seems like over the years, the translation into English has made some of the dialogue sound in-human. The English is semi broken, and sounds "too proper" to really be how true native English speakers speak. If you ever needed help/volunteers to help you with translation or to make the dialogue read more genuine, I'd be happy to help! :) I dont mean any of this in a rude or insulting way, just offering my assistance if you needed/wanted any :) Cheer m8!

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Wait is it broken or is it too proper xD because that sounds like it counters itself from 2 different extremes.

But yeah, the thing is people complain a lot it’s not 100% proper so it’s fixed to be that then people complain it’s not slang enough for how English speakers speak or whatever.

Actually, when the game first was made, lucky had a gangster accent to fit in with his background of being from the mob but people complained it wasn’t proper English.

Anyway, it’s a tug and pull on this and at the end of the day characters all have their own personalities and how they talk reflects that. Like Prim and charlotte are supposed to be proper and formal how they talk, charlotte more so because of her high class background. Where Layla has a lot of science terminology in her vocabulary. Or Mary has very precise English because of her mother watching over her, or Yui speaking 3 words because of her abuse. And Celestine has more ghetto terminology.

Some things are intentional because of the characters or story/lore reasons, or it’s because of humor and a more simple way to read it.

We have a Discord so you can join and tell me which dialogues you think are broken, so I can fix them properly ♥