This was pretty good! However, I think that if some of those choices led to Game Overs, it would make the over all message of the story hit way harder and the ending be way more cathartic.
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Thank you very much. I have only good endings on purpose to show that there is always hope at the end.
I completely understand your point. I also thought about creating some bad endings, but I decided to avoid them at the end to show that even when things seem very dark, it can still turn toward something positive, no matter how long it takes you. :)