Hi Tom,
On the Whisper blasphemy (pg. 67), the text for Omnipresence seems to be wrapping around weirdly. (the 'E' is dropping to a new line) Also, a smaller thing, but on the Absentia hook (pg. 64), there's a punctuation missing. "...heal the injury If you have..."
Anyways, love the game and am excited to check out the new Games for Freaks.