Hey man just played the prologue and wanted to let you know that I think it's great and has good potential. I love a zombie apocalypse AVN and this one has a good beginning.
However, that being said, I think probably English is not your primary language? There are quite a few mistakes in the dialogues, and some others just fall very flat. So I think you should look at that when you can, even if it's just like asking chatGPT to help you write them better. The chars sound real enough and each seems to be distinct enough, but in some places there's a few things that don't make feel very natural in how the conversation goes.
Still, I enjoyed the prologue and I'd gladly give it a solid 8/10. Well, maybe a 7/10 cause you'll never seen cops & soldiers with body armour and miniskirts showing parnties LOL