The game honestly still is pretty low on the list when it comes to decent story and execution. The whole diary thing was honestly just not done well, so I hope you guys maybe make an effort to do something about it. If don't know what I mean, basically. It's only function so far is to 1. Choose your boyfriend type, 2. Get good, bad or some type of average end. Which honestly isn't that bad of a thing, but because those are really the only two purpose of it, I felt it could have been done at least a bit better. For example, having mix in personalities. I honestly feel it is pretty lazy game design to have all these choices just for it to be you HAVE to choose only a specific two cliche personality type to get the certain route you want. Like what about a flirty bad boy, or angry controlling flirty boy etc... Which I feel could be easily represented just through the writing. Speaking of writing, the writing is still pretty "meh". Like it is getting better, but like I mean... the whole flow of the story is just completely off, doesn't feel like a natural relationship building at all. I was explained to before that this game was originally the work of another team, so I get why it is like this. So, I am sorry for giving such harsh critiques, but I can't in good mind say this game is very good, since I have played much better visual novels with better writing for free here on itch.io. The better writing simply just means the development is clear and easy to see between MC and love interest and there aren't some big jumps that skip important relationship development points. If want more detail about what I mean, just let me know and I will be glad to go into great detail.
What I will say though just to make sure this isn't just all critiques.. The 4 personality choices for the MC at the start is a good. That is actually the main reason I say the game is going in write direction. Since the MC just being completely moody and just quite rude of a person was off putting to those that dislike that type of personality (many obviously did). So I am glad you guys did notice people complaining about that.
What I hope to see in the future for this game, is: 1. Much better writing (I feel this one should be the main focus); 2. Better game play with personalities; 3. Maybe if possible more CG's. Like honestly after saying all this , unless there are a lot of improvements in future, I will have to say it is not worth paying anymore for the expansion, just to see two new personalities, if the writing doesn't get better.
Once again I am sorry for all the critiques I know, it sucks for creators to receive critiques like this, but I am not one to sugarcoat things just to make creators feel happy. People have to express my feelings or things in life will always only be mediocre. So hopefully if see what I write here, try not to feel to bad. However, just try to see my overall point.. after all you guys are asking people to buy the game.