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Interesting! There's a pretty huge tonal shift between the first and second halves, and I'm not altogether sure how I feel about it. It's a twee ending to a grimdark world. The choices in the second half also felt simpler, boiling down to whether to continue with the story or not. Both halves had their strengths, and I enjoyed them individually; I'm just not sure they fit together.

Thank you for playing, and thank you for the feedback! I can totally understand your point; My intent was to display the change of posture for Connor, but maybe it's too abrupt for a short story. Thank you again!