Good interpretation of the theme. It does feel a bit incomplete, like it's not the whole story. And the gameplay could be more developed. But I really did like the storytelling, and felt moved emotionally. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! I did feel like I had bitten off more than I could chew, considering the time limit of the jam. I have an outline of what the later 'trials' will be and how the story ends, all along the theme of 'Persistence' but I wasn't able to make time to finish it. Lesson learned for the next jam!
