Heres a honest review
despite a few typos here and there, the writing was pretty good and funny, the plot is surprisingly engaging for a gooner game, kety probally has the most engaging gimmick ive seen in a game like this. however I kinda wish we knew just a bit more about the charcters personal lives, and sometimes the Mc can come off as rather abusive to spesific charcters, even just a admission of genuine care for a charecter could help alot with this,
Now to a spesific issue.
The talk button: i was really expecting it to do more, even just a simple couple of alternating lines based on chapter and location could help, better yet, add a little flirting system, charcter has some alternating diolouge, that diolouge tells you charecter lore, and in the flirting game you can use it to answer a question and gain love or just depending on the question. And this could definitely help flesh out the charcters and make them more interesting.
Finally I wanted to say that despite some of these gripes, it was rather good overall, the weird meta narrative stuff is fun, (might need a little more elaboration story wise, but still good) and you should definitely keep moving forward with the game, im assuming english isn't your first language so id highly recommend seeing if you can find someone to help with translations aswell. But all in all a solid
8/10