Loved it! Especially how expressive it was regarding the emotional journey of the main character!
I was really thinking about what would be going on in their head. They're broke, but ordering food and paying for MovieFlex. It is not just about being broke; it is about being in a bad mental state.
It also got me thinking about... how good an idea it is to invite Darren. Yes, if he's a good guy, then, of course. Even if these are their last moments, at least they are with someone. However, he could very well not be a good guy, especially when the world is ending. Still, maybe they will match even then. Who knows. So many possibilities. So tragic either way. Lovely writing! 👏