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I feel like this update was too short, and I'd like future versions to add more content and delve deeper into the development of the other characters. I also think the animations could benefit from more detail, dynamism, and movement, taking advantage of different angles to make the scenes more fluid and expressive. For example, I feel like the girls' vaginas lack detail; they're missing something. When I see them, I don't get an overwhelming urge to go down on them. You know what I mean? I'd like them to improve in those areas. Regarding Leslie, I think she's one of the pillars of the game, and I'd like her development and scenes to be handled with more tension and atmosphere, without rushing things. I don't want them to underutilize her and have her sleeping with the son in the next update. I think they could get much more out of her internal conflict, her morals, and her doubts, creating scenes that play with that psychological tension before moving on to more direct interactions. For example, Leslie gets aroused when she sees her son's penis, and when she realizes she can't have sex, she masturbates and ejaculates. Or her son asks her to masturbate because he wants to see her feel good, and she does it. I don't know if I'm explaining myself well.


Or that the son gives her oral sex, but not out of the blue. Before these scenes take place, we first need some emotional build-up or conflict so that when the ideal moment arrives, the experience is more satisfying and arousing. In general, I feel it would be positive to give more time to each development, improve the pacing, and work a little more on the gradual eroticism and the small details that make the experience more immersive and satisfying. It would also be interesting to see more content that explores other characters to balance the focus and allow the story to breathe. In conclusion: Improve animations and dynamism. Develop the secondary characters more. Better build tension and narrative pacing. Don't rush important scenes and make better use of Leslie's emotional and psychological weight. I think these changes could greatly improve the quality of the game. I hope this comment is taken into account. I want the scenes to be more varied, and also for there to be an option to increase the speed of the action, you know what I mean. And that in the same scene there be at least 10 different angles and 10 different poses; don't just vary them, change them. ---


I hope the animation improves. And that there's some kind of conflict or build-up before sex. Also, improve the animations and details. And the flirting too. And make sure sex isn't just penetration. Include kisses. On the penis or other kinky stuff, you know? Vari them, I don't know. More emotional tension or conflict before intimate scenes, so they have more impact. It would also be useful to add options within the scenes, like being able to adjust the speed or switch between different shots, to make them more interactive and varied. I sincerely believe that if these aspects are improved, the overall quality of the game could increase significantly. I hope this comment can be taken into account.

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Jesus Christ dude, I encourage feedback but please try to be succinct in your points and constructive in your comments.

The update was over an hour of gameplay, I'm always working to improve the art and animations and I'm taking every care to make Leslie's story as satisfying as possible. I can't make everyone happy and I would 100% suggest you don't assume it'll be totally to your specific standards

good on you for reading the whole thing cus most people would not be bothered to, far to muc

"Oh, you are taking your time making a free game for us? Then I hope you are making it exactly like I want it! Give me 40 fuck-angles and pussies I want to eat!"