the idea is really great and i loved the writing style, each character felt well realized in such a short time. all the storylets were fairly simplistic, but that was only really a weakness on the lust storylets because they were taking on a more complex and fraught issue. i really hate to say it like this but it felt very male in the perspective and gets way more uncomfortable than the other paths, i think your content warnings don't quite cover it. the visuals were very smart and reflected the character really well and helped a lot with the clarity and tone, something that's needed with such an outlandish and surreal premise.