This is a great story. Great premise. Great writing. Clearly a labor of love. I just downloaded it and I'm already hooked. But the art...
It looks great for what it is, but the AI generated art takes me right out of the fiction. Dead eyes. Eyes that are closed when they should be open, or not focused where they should. It's more than distracting, it's unsettling. There is some serious uncanny valley going on. I can't even look at the art, I'm just reading the story. It's not your fault, it's the limitations of the technology.
You've crafted a world that deserves better. Don't settle for creepy AI ghouls. I say this in all sincerity. This has the potential to be a spectacular AVN, but to get there you need an artist.
Please don't give up! I look forward to following this story!