The art in this game is very well put together (for the most part) and I have half a mind to think that's what you spent the most time on, which isn't a bad thing, but there are some things I wish had more care taken to them. There are a couple dialogue issues here and there and I'm not talking about the grammar, though I wont harp on that at all since it seems that English is not your first language and I don't think it's fair to hold something like that against you. I feel that the game ends without answering any real questions, there was no point where the crying lady showed up or made a statement or a call to action or anything so the whole "crying women" mystery person, at least from a players perspective, didn't really matter in the end. I do see what this game is trying to be though and I do think you did a not to shabby job at telling the story you wanted to. Overall, the stylings of this game carry it and it is a good first attempt at a folklore game, good work!