Just finished this. So mad about that cliffhanger. (Not really, I just want to know what happens next! :'(
sadly he went way too branching. he needed more linear. it's too much work for one person and will take a giant toll on your mental health trying to keep track of everything. i wish he would just scrap the branches and bring them together and finish the story but he wants to write the other game so it's fine. that one is more linear and less taxing.