I absolutely LOVE the world building in this story, the way that each character has their own personality and the way it shapes the interactions they have with each other.
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I adore how easily and naturally the conversations flow when Cantor and Darwin are talking casually amongst themselves, especially the silences that happen occasionally because it makes it so much more immersive to read. It’s similar with the observatory scene too, the tension being displayed clearly and leaving a heavy feeling in the air just on words alone. The clashing views on the same topics makes for a lovely opposition that just feels great to read through.
This isn’t exclusively to only the third build, but I felt the need to comment on it—the way each character has different poses and expressions rather than static ones really adds to the story, giving a layer of depth to it. Personally, I find myself addicted to constantly trying to see how the sprites change from a previous one because of the small, subtle shifts that you recognize without even realizing it.
I’ve said it once and I’ll say it again hundred times over: this needs more attention ASAP. Can’t wait for more