Before anything, I’m not a good reviewer or writer, but I liked the game a lot. I played it all in one day and just wanted to help the community and appreciate the dev’s talent.
sorry if i make the game worse with this review, i would appreciate if anyone could review my review
Okay lets go... v0.3.5
The game is in development and is being carefully made, which is a really good sign, especially because the dev is actually listening to the community. Still, I’d like to talk about some flaws and positives.
The visuals are great. Honey Select 2 is a really good base for games like this, and the renderings are nice and smooth, especially considering the dev probably isn’t working with a high-end PC big team. Pretty good for the current scene standard in 2025, nothing to complain about here.
The soundtrack is fantastic. Games with this amount of music and sound effects for every scene make the immersion really strong. Great choices for the right moments.
Now let’s wrap it up.
(Contains mild spoilers)
The writing has a few issues that, given the quality of the renders and soundtrack, I honestly didn’t expect.
First, Olivia’s hair changes color for a while after the protagonist’s coma—from black to light brown, then back to black again. I know this isn’t a priority right now since fixing it would take time that could be better spent progressing the story, so that’s fine. I’m just mentioning it because it breaks a bit of consistency, even if it’s just a rendering issue.
When writing a story with a mysterious tone, it’s important to tread carefully. You can easily overuse mystery or fail to create real tension. In this visual novel, I think it’s slightly overused—not a big deal, though. You can really feel the protagonist’s point of view: he doesn’t know much and feels weak for the mission he’s carrying, which works well. But when some of the mysteries start to reveal themselves, the earlier tension doesn’t linger as strongly as it could.
The russian choice: the 10th choice in the game is in russian, please correct it.
If I had to give it a score based on my experience with around forty games, I’d say 9.2 out of 10.