Nice one. Found some typos and some punctuation marks missing, though.
"New recruits, follow me; I'll be talking you to the training grounds; we don't have a moment to lose." Said a man you hadn't noticed before.
Taking.
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You're swords meet as you clash, it's a struggle for you both as you try to overpower the other.
This appears after choosing "That's easy I hit him... hard". Also, add a comma after That's easy, please.
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You take a more thorough look around the area and spot some of the different wares the vendors are selling, you're not sure as to why and how they are allowed to be here Then you realize they must be working for the military, most, if not all
There's a . missing.
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You are currently wearing Black pants
You look at all the pants they have to offer, and there's nothing exciting.
This appears after choosing to see the shoes.
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- Intelligence: 27
- Charisma: 12
- Strength: 36
- Dexterity: 34
Charming: 55
Appalling: 45
Comedian: 70
Soldier: 30
Impulsive: 45
Calculated: 55
Did you mercilessly beat Alister?: No, why the hell would anyone do that?
Barrowed money from Alister: False
Did you buy the potentially magical book?: Yes
What armor did you get?: You are not currently wearing any armor
Did you buy the combat knife?: Yes
Did you buy the bow?: No
Did you buy the shield?: No
I chose the free armor, IIRC.
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The sword is a very versatile weapon, you can slash, stab, and even bash people with the pomle.
Pommel.
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"Silas get up!" You hear a voice say as you are being shaken awake.
"Silas we got to get out of here." The person you can't quite see whispers.
Add commas after the PC's name and you'll be golden.