Hi there, I had some trouble reading your mission. Could be my Word is just chewing it up but might be worth taking a look at the formatting:
Also, it's in doc format so might want to change that to a pdf for it to be a valid submission. Reading through the mission I like the concept of fighting over the downed ship with the diplomat and objective random movement is always funny to me. Did you intend for the Diplomat and all the intel objectives to be clustered in the centre? I'd be a little concerned it would lead to both players just dogpiling the middle and it being a bloodbath that ignores objectives. Still, I like the concept for sure.