SPOILERS.
YEAH REALLY SPOILERS.
You finished the game? Okay cool.
I may be nitpicking small details but I don't understand why Lee has Angel's gum saved in his shrine.
The gum event happens in Angel's 2nd visit, so that implies he became obsessed over their first meeting?
Was he already obsessed before the game started? Well, I don't see anything implying that in the game so I don't think that's the answer. I feel like by the first encounter is a bit too sudden...
SPOILERS OVER
But overall this was amazing. You are a really skilled writer.