Really good! But some notes I noticed while reading it:
- There are a handful of erroneous pronouns (eg fem Raven being referred to as He), if I do a second playthrough I'll take notes of where they are so I can give more specific feedback.
- The romance choices that list each character name and have to say "masc name/fem name" can actually change dynamically to match what name they have. You simply need an if statement to swap out two different links (eg <<if $Agender is "fem">>[[Athena|Passagename]]<<else>>[[Axis|Passagename]]<</if>>).