Yippee!! I'm super excited to be able to play the rewritten demo fhsjf I hope progress is going well!! As for the comedy, the thing I remember that made me chuckle most was the whole interaction with Grey Horse in the stables XD
Yep, progress is going pretty well so far! I'm not sure at what point I want to release it (whether it'll be more satisfying for a new demo to at least include the to-be rewritten celen portion, or for me to release it sooner sometime during the journey there), but I like the changes most of the time lol. Like I'll read it to edit/add more writing one day and be smug about it, then the next, I'm wondering if I'm blind and word-deaf--but welp, that's life for you. I just want to release a completed IF to the best of my current abilities!
Ahaha, I didn't plan any of the horsing around but I couldn't help writing something dumb. Glad it wasn't boring and got a laugh out of someone :)