beautiful beautiful writttingg!!!! I often found myself pausing to just take in the descriptions and metaphors.. The characters are super well structured and they feel ALIVE (the back ground characters too!!) I like how they all hold some kind of importance in world, rather than just oh two hot guys and then everyone else adshkjhdjsa loved everything about it jsjsjksaj super excited to see what the future holds for you and the game!! keep being amazingggnn <3