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It looks like my previous comment was deleted or something, which is a little shady, but i’ll post another one anyway. This game overall great, but a few things desperately need fixing. For one, Mio really needs to be removed or at least alter her introduction. It was done so poorly that I don’t think i’ve seen a worse introduction in any game or anime i’ve ever experienced, it was that poorly done. If you’re insistent on keeping that as it is and not removing it in the next update, at least have 0.9 explain in much better detail what’s going on. You can’t just add a random nobody and have nobody acknowledge the fact that anything is wrong. If it was just in that “other world” thing then fine, I guess, but you can’t carry that over to the real world, it just doesn’t make any sense and it kills the entire story you’re trying to tell.

Also for anyone wondering whether to try this game, if you want a decent story and some nice characters, go for it. If you’re just here for an AVN ‘gooning’ game, this isn’t the one for you, it doesn’t have any sex scenes or anything like that and 0.8 was the first one to even introduce a kiss. I wouldn’t hold out much hope that things are gonna escalate very far beyond that anytime soon, especially with how short each update is. (You can genuinely click start new game, hold the skip button and reach the end of 0.8 in about 8 minutes).


To be clear, I do like this game. I’m a female myself and there’s just not enough of these AVN games with a good female lead. I’m just a bit disappointed at some of the amateur decisions that have been made which serve only to sabotage how good the game could be.

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I'm a bit confused how you see Mio's introduction and jump straight to "amateur author" instead of thinking that perhaps she is a deliberate mystery. Spoilers for v8 but did you not notice how Hubert seems to have never heard of her until she walks into the room, then suddenly acts like he's known her all along? Or how the memories section is amended to include scenes we've never seen before? Or the little pop up that says something like "new? character profile added". There's something going on with her, and her introduction seems clearly intended to be jarring . If you want to criticize it as a mystery, that's fine, but I think dismissing it as simply not bothering to introduce a character is frankly wrong.

Yeah it's very confusing what they are saying there.  Her introduction actually reminded me a lot of a horror story I listed to a bit ago.  I think it was called fleshgait.  I even used the concept for a creature in D&D campaign running.  So was quite entertained to see that concept being used, especially in Yuri reading of all places.