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It's not everyday I create an account just to leave a comment, but I had to say something.

I almost cried at least twice, and I've only just gotten to Chapter 3, and I especially love when the fourth wall gets broken, feels more, deeper when you include the reader as you do, and the "sex ed", brilliant. I wandered to Itch to be lewd, but I'm thankful I found wholesome, there's even times I'm caught reminiscing about the past with how deep the storyline gets, so much passion, emotions, connection, it just warms my heart more than my dick gets hard(which yes, happens a lot too), and that's what really drives me to want to subscribe, but I can't even afford that, though the next time I get cash, I will be sending some your way, also because the discord sounds cool. You must really care about what your readers have to say, especially with the Dev comments, so I would love to be a part of the community, not to have my words heard, but to show my support to such a wonderful developer, keep up the amazing work, and may many fortunes find their way to you.

Claudius, Your Newest Fan

Waterthose10 days ago(+1)

Wow! Thank you for such a lovely comment, it's comments like these that keeps me going. Would love to see you be part of the discord community (don't have that many actual yappers in chat so it's a good and bad thing).

The 4th wall breaking isn't everyone's thing, but my readers have gotten used to it by now. In the future chapters I also use it to explain mistakes and stuff like that.

I do care deeply about what my readers have to say, which is why I put a survey at the end of each version. Not to ask what fetishes they want or what not, but basically a vibe check on the chapter or ideas for the future.

Even if you can't support me financially, you reading my silly AVN means the world to me. So thank you for giving my AVN a chance and I'm happy that you love it.

KingClaudius10 days ago (1 edit)

Yeah, the 4th wall breaking definitely caught me off guard, but I loved it right away, and that whole "no rough FJ technical error" truly added remarkable depth, made me want to give her a hug X3 I for one am not a fan either, but I can see the appeal too. I especially enjoyed when she woke up next to the guild receptionist staring at her, so fluffing adorable, I was excited to see where they would end up, and that dual love confession, priceless. Keep up the amazing work, I'm going to curl up in bed and restart the story now that I have it downloaded, its a keeper.

P.S. Even included the files in its own folder for easier extraction, you're a special kind of nerd that truly cares about the little things X3 keep up the amazing work. We're all proud of you in so many ways.

Waterthose10 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

Elaine is a favorite among a lot of my readers (she does get a lot of screen time and the way I written her seems to resonate with a lot of people).

Also, I'm sure some people only want the images anyways and want to skip all the story so.

Can't wait to see your opinion once you get to finish Chapter 6.

KingClaudius9 days ago (1 edit)

Adding a Gallery for images already found might help that if there's not one already(just now thought while rereading, that they probably save at those points already with so many save points, but just saying.), and let them skip the story, don't let their lewdness discourage you from giving it your all and making a story that will bring never ending emotions of all kinds. I personally am too into the story to want to stop and, well yeah... anyways, its an AVN I cannot put down, I literally stopped looking for games once I found this masterpiece. Hopefully I don't finish too quickly XP I'll be sure to share my opinion once I finish Chapter 6, keep up the amazing work!

P.S. I enjoyed the rant about Futanari, IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME SOMEONE SAID SOMETHING, THANK YOU!

P.P.S. I've met a hermaphrodite irl, just to let you know it's not fantasy.

Waterthose9 days ago(+1)

Heh, sadly hermaphrodites irl aren't as 'fun' as fiction. And for a gallery, I want it to look a certain way so I've been trying to design it slowly, add to the fact that I'm a terrible coder and it's taking a while.

KingClaudius8 days ago

Fantasy definitely makes life less 'fun', but nothing beats a good fantasy novel X3

Show space in gallery when chapter page unlocked, otherwise keep hidden. I'm terrible at coding, but if you're looking for a Gallery that doesn't spoil how many images are coming, that logic might help depending on the style of coding.

I'll probably be done chapter 3-4 tonight, and I read through the Waitresses rants about work, just to let ya know that I read through everything, I'm taking my time with this delicious 'oven' X3

Waterthose8 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

Lucky for you, the later chapters 4,5 and 6 are all increasingly longer (2x in the case of chapter 4>5 and about 15%? more for chapter 5 > 6). Chapter 7 that I'm, currently working on will likely be shorter.

KingClaudius8 days ago

"What do you want in this world?"

"To be honest, I'm not sure right now. I'm still trying to figure things out and make people I meet happy along the way."

Currently here in the novel, and had to comment about it, because this resonates so well, and why I've gotten into similar situations helping others X3 Your story never ceases to hit that spot. I hope your day has been well.

Waterthose8 days ago

I'm doing alright, I see that you really are taking your time enjoying my AVN though! Some people speed run the latest update in sub 2 hours. (And it's like 68k words)

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