loving it so far, honestly kinda surprised you are a newer to this stuff from what you mentioned in the intro, you are a really good writer. one question though, you recently finished a mass effect playthrough didnt you?
edit: holy crap this just went from a really good vn to having me on the edge of my seat in anticipation, i dont know how you did it but jesus the lore of a whole other vn being integrated so well and seamlessly is absolutely mindblowing to me 10/10 amazing job