I liked this A LOT. Right up my alley. Faith seeing transformation as an escape from a life of stagnation, the lore of vampire supremacy and cruelty, and how Vi diverges from that, and how that hurts her, it's all SO GOOD. I love how cleanly the story gets split in half, where you come to the realization that Vi is kind of a pathetic dumbass and Faith is perceptive and cruel, an inversion of how the originally appear in the first half. The epilogue was also really great, the last line of "I need to get out of this town" goes incredibly hard. It all coalesces brilliantly.
Amazing work!