Hey, developer! I played your game, and I’ve got to say—it’s pretty interesting. I like the characters, and the premise is fun too. But I’d like to point out a couple of things (though others might not see them as issues):
The R18 scene animations — they’re good, but the problem is that it’s just pure sex. Sure, that might be a big plus for some players, but I think it’d be better to add some dialogue, sounds (I actually have some lying around), and smoother frame transitions.
As for scene transitions — they feel a bit too fast and rough. For a story-driven game, adding more smoothness and connecting the dialogue more naturally would really help.
Still, the game’s good, and I hope you keep working on it. Take care, and good luck!