Andrey
Fun - 6/10
Functionality - 8/10
Creativity - 8/10
Theme - 8/10
Not bad, the story was definitely a meaningful one. In terms of fun, it needs a bit more work. Would have been cool to have like a "imagination" sequence from listening to music, and a "gaming" sequence from playing the game. There are creative ways to achieve that in Bitsy. Game is generally well functioning though some items that are physical you end up overlapping, and some that you would overlap end up blocking you. Also there's a level that is missing animations and audio, it feels like there should be? Creativity wise, I like the use of memories or rooms. But I feel like more could have been done with animations and colors and sounds. I do really like what you have done with the sound effects and music. I especially like how you emulated a ringing phone. Thematically, it gets close. The story itself doesn't quite sell me on the idea of texture, though it tells an important lesson. The game itself does tackle ideas of texture, though could have gone deeper in terms of analysis and its implementation in the game. Otherwise, I think this was good.