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Sometimes to make a death feel really sudden and / or shocking, I've seen it happen in a single sentence or just a few words. You've been with this character for the whole book, and then gone. Way too fast to register, it always makes me do a double take. The abruptness really makes it feel real, although of course this isn't best for all stories, and I'm not really a writer, just a reader :)


good luck on your book!

That is a very interesting observation.

I think readers can sometimes notice even more than the writers themselves. Writers are mainly concentrated on their own creation, while readers, or to put it crudely - content consumers, can see the entire picture as a whole. I agree that a different approach may be suitable for every literary work. 

Thank you for taking the time to share your perspective!