Play Narrative Fiction
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Story / Plot | #10 | 2.840 | 3.667 |
| Dialogue / Writing Style | #10 | 2.324 | 3.000 |
| Characters / Voice | #11 | 2.324 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #11 | 2.496 | 3.222 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Here for anyone that has troubling downloading, or wants to play it from browser Instead!
https://arcweave.com/app/project/DvlOxKXEdx/play
Nice. I almost lost interest once I clocked the similarities to that one movie, but I stuck it out through the maze of narrative and wound up pleasantly surprised. It's a touching story that winds up implying a lot with just a little. It could have perhaps used another editing pass, both for proofreading and to smooth out some of the exposition, but on the whole, a worthwhile experience.
What movie are you referring? Thanks for playing it. Godot gave me a hard time while trying to make it work so yeah, the time I had alotted for extra fixes and cleanup any string/formatting bugs was cut significantly
Oh? I thought the game was a pretty clear homage to Inception. It's surprising if that's not the case.
Oh, I mixed Matrix, Ubik, Sleeper Citizen and the short story of a woman taking care of his dad with alzheimer while writing, but you are right! it evokes Inception now that I think of it.