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Hi Seizel, thanks for sharing this in-progress game. It is fun and sexy. 

I am wondering if there is a better place to send feedback for you. Anyway I hope this is helpful. I do not want to discourage you at all.

- My biggest issue is that I am getting stuck, meaning that there does not seem to be anything to do, despite open quest lines.

- Currently I have no idea how to progress towards finding the locker key. I have met everyone in the school but there are no new dialog options. I don't see anything to click that I haven't clicked. (I did find the glasses and met the teacher's daughter... Finding the book was almost too hard, and now I do not know how to summarize it or otherwise progress on that questline)

- I bought batteries at the store but Hannah does not have any dialog options anymore when I meet her in the living room. She was previously whining about batteries in the remote. maybe I did a bad dialog option earlier? 

- I do not know how to advance the gym quest line now that he wants a picture.

- I get the feeling that sometimes I just need to go to bed for quest lines to progress, but after sleeping two days away with no progress, I am starting to think there is nothing left to try. 

- BTW, I think Emma and Bianca have dialog where they call me Seizel instead of my in-game name :) 

- Python exceptions occur after speaking to Sister Lilly in the afternoon (about statue), when playing $50 game, and when clicking the image Emma sent me.

I am having fun with this game and am eager to play updates and get further. Thanks for listening. 

- aj, probably

Update: I was able to obtain the photo needed for the gym quest line, but trying to show Mickey triggers dialog with the fat cheerleader in the gym. I still have no idea how to find the key to my locker. I don't know how to look for pieces of Sariel. And perhaps most frustratingly, I know I need a swimsuit but I do not know how to get one. They don't sell it at the store and I can't, like, steal one from a locker room or go to the beach or anything. 

One thing I thought you did that was really nice was have the Sunday Morning church experience suggest coming back in the afternoon. Good hint. My suggestion is to give similar hints for a lot of the quests. For example, when Mickey asks for the photo, I am thinking maybe I need to sweet-talk Evelyn. Wasted time visiting her in the library every morning. Maybe he could have suggested "maybe you can catch a cheerleader changing in the gym locker rooms or something, I don't know, kid" or something like that. For a long time I didn't even realize I could go into the locker room - I thought the gym was just empty and there was nothing more to it. With the locker key questline, I have talked to everyone at school, despite the hint of another student having my key, there does not seem to be a way to progress. I am wondering if the game is waiting for something else to happen first, or maybe a week of in-game time needs to progress, I don't know. But if I need to accomplish something else before I can make progress finding the key, then maybe that should be made clear, or maybe the quest of "find your key" should not even start until the pre-requisite is accomplished. Or maybe I am just overlooking something. If that is the case then maybe a hinting system or more obvious clues would help.

I am refreshing your page every day to see when the next version is released. Good job and keep making improvements - i am impressed


Update 2: Replaying from the beginning, I think if you get the panties before the swimsuit, you can never pick up the swimsuit. So talk to the girls at the pool before getting Susan's panties.

If you fail to take a picture of Laila in time, there is an error, image Leila7 not found. (Probably due to typo of Leila vs Laila)

I was able to progress on the swimming quest a bit, at first it was confusing why I could not train as promised, and I think Miss Michelle gives an incorrect schedule when asked. I helped Ashley with the bandage but I was surprised to see that on subsequent days, I still had the exact same dialog options with her and Miss Michelle, and Ashley still calls me a moron instead of updating me on her knee, expressing gratitude, etc. I thought that maybe after helping her, I would be able to ask her about locker keys or something, but no. So that's where I am giving up for now.

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Hello and thank you very much for telling me where are the bugs and other things, when I try it I don't usually find so many bugs because I already know where all the things are. The game as you say is in development so many of the quests, if not all, are incomplete. Thank you again for spending so much time on this humble game.

do you have an idea of  when you think the  game will be complete, or you can't tell yet?

Hi, I don't know when it'll be finished because I still want to add a lot of things. But I try to update it every month.