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The main plot of this game is already pretty good in my opinion 'Long lost prince is a former assassin and live as a commoner' have a great potential how's the story will come out later. The story pacing itself is kinda way too fast, you just wake up go to bar and some elite soldier telling you 'you're our lost prince and you need to go back' and the mc just respond for once double check and just accept it, yeaaah it's not really great for my liking. And the worldview this vn? Are we living in modern era? Middle age? I can't tell for sure, all the modern tech details just not mixing up well with Royal Family plot (bah maybe it's just my preference story lol) 


Now back to mc upbringing, i hope i can get a brief flashback how he's got kidnapped in the first place,  how he's get raised by his adoptive parents, and his time when he's still in Black blade. Just hearing the mc just narrating the story it's kinda make the story bland, the story pacing itself not making it any better. One more thing hmmm it's about the mc appearance as an otter, how he's an otter in the first place? Is he got morphed by the kidnapper? The Royal Family itself? Or other person? Yeah there's no explanation for this and making a hole in the story. 


Alright, after all i still enjoying this vn and i hope we can get more story in the future. 

Hi! Thank you for the feedback and compliment. My team and I have been working hard on the pacing and story issues and more! So feel free to check the upcoming one soon.