I cant really play the demo. On my phone s25 there are problems.
1 - the top bar is not visible, i just worked out something should show there
2 - in recruit menu there is a black box behind that looks wrong, and more importantly the recruit button does not respond so cant progress
Another tip, when you start the game it stays on a brown screen for awhile when jt first loads. Even with my good internet i wasnt sure if it was broken. Should say loading at minimum
Edit: just to add it does look cool, i hope you are encouraged by feedback not discouraged!