Viability: playing from start to end is nice I feel that there should be abit more of a difference for what you need to select. like having something bold can be a emphasis but I think its the color of the text? maybe the boldness being a different color may work more than bigger green
Theme: I do love the part of the big text on the internet being this zooming slowly in!I think having abit more
Presentation: I do like the images and the different colored text for who is talking, tho the second image isnt showing up. Also when the game is not in full screen, it shows it being a very long strip, it can be bigger to help with that. When in full screen, everything is viewable but off centered.
Engagement: I think the story is very interesting and the dialogue exchanges are wonderful!
-KT